Nominations for Poems Workshopped in September
Start nominating in this thread as of September 1st.
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John's glosa, If I Returnedwhat a great start to 'glosa month' If I Returned If I returned, there'd be disappointment of my own making, it's true. I'd make all new structures symbols, know everyone's...
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Glosa: Maps impossible to refold by Esther Murer Maps impossible to refold are replaced by robot voices that send us where we think we want to go. But we end up somewhere else. – Mary Cresswell,...
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Bob's A Divorced Man Remembers The Summer Palace We were sure our days would be spent like lotus blossoms on Kunming Lake Our disputes would be small, settled in the Hall of Benevolence. What do I...
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These are all so good! Please cast your votes, poets! Thursday's October 1st. I'll send our nominations by Friday.
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i'm sure I posted this- I'll second Esther's
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These are all so wonderful!I'll second John's glosa.
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Oh, good, Terry! Yes, too bad we can't send four. Thanks for voting, Mar. ( I really want to see John's go. Just read it now afresh, and it's even better than it was before. I really GET the end, now. )
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i second and third John's poem, Esther's poem and Bob's poem....
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then why don't I delete yours, and put it into October? i love it. ( You might have wanted to move a punctuation mark, or something, anyway. . .
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Thanks very much, everyone! I'll send John's "If I Returned," Esther's Glosa, and Bob's "A Divorced Man Remembers..." Good luck to all of you. Great poems! I'm betting we place!
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good luck to Esther and Bob, and thanks!here's the version, including cabeza, italics and a couple extra periods....If I returnedThe ground is white with snowIt's morning, of New Year's Eve, 1968,...
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"a couple extra periods" all the best, everyone! Toni, I have a vision, also.
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Got it, John. I'd sent our entry without seeing your final version, but I just sent a correction to IBPC. I'm sure David will honor that.
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